PIRATE, remus p. atticus

[REMUS ATTICUS]

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NAME & ALIAS ■ Remus Pomponius Atticus, Umbra Sacerdos(Shadow of the Priest)
AGE ■ Seventeen
RACE ■ Human
GENDER ■ Male
SEXUALITY ■ Heterosexual
HEARTH ■ Thriller Bark, West Blue
PROFFESION ■ Catholic Archbishop turned Pirate Shipwright

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PERSONALITY ■

LIKES

DISLIKES

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ABILITIES ■
Solveret
This technique deals with the person lowering to the floor into dodge rolls, handstands, and body spins that require that the user hold themselves up with their arms in awkward positions that would be near impossible for normal people to accomplish. They allow their arms to hold their body into the air while dodging and kicking at the same time. Also with this technique mainly focuses on ducking low while using their hands to maneuver their body around the ground for attacking and evasion. The range of this attack is fifteen meters. The way he he looks and attacks is actually quite simple. When using this technique he is constantly alert of his surroundings and where people are. He attacks by using his legs and feet strength. Remus can only use this for four posts a thread, this is the limit because extreme fatigue starts to settle in from all the constant movement he does.

STRENGTHS ■
Major

• Haste
  
• Intelligence
  

Minor

• Accuracy
  
• Heart
  

WEAPONS/ITEMS ■ Six shot revolver, Bible and Rosary

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nickname; sailor
contact: pm.
face claim: nabari no ou, miharu

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[REMUS ATTICUS]

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ABILITY NAME: name of your devil fruit, haki, or super-human.
ABILITY TYPE: devil fruit, haki, super-human ability.
ABILITY LEVEL: strength of ability, based on type.
ABILITY DESCRIPTION: general description of your ability.

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[MODATRON CAP]

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Everything looks good but there is something that needs just a bit of fixing. On your ability, Solveret, I'll need a bit more explaining on exactly how you hit, look, etc. Also give me some positives and negatives of the ability, is it going to take a lot of energy? Will it increase or decrease anything? Things like that.

[REMUS ATTICUS]

Fixed. Does that make more sense?

[MODATRON CAP]

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Very close, but for something where you are always noticing things around you and can easily go from one position to another and hit, then there needs to be a weakness. Please implement one.

[REMUS ATTICUS]

Added the weakness.

[MODATRON CAP]

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