Fundamentals

[Phoenix Blaza]

▌ NAME: Super leg
▌ LEVEL: 3
▌ MAJORS: Power and haste
▌ MINORS:
▌ DESCRIPTION: His ultimate striking attack that can be used in any kicking manner or fashion meaning this technique can be utilized by any type of kick.Bringing his leg back as if he was cocking it back, storing before releasing it in one kick. The strength alone of this kick is able to break bones even if blocked with body part. If this kick hit directly where it is intended it can shatter bone. Can only be use 3 time in a thread for cool down he will wait unless 2 post..
▌ BERRIES: Level 1 (Starting Technique)

▌ NAME: Cross blastʹ
▌ LEVEL: 3
▌ MAJORS: Power and haste
▌ MINORS:
▌ DESCRIPTION:As phoenix put his two standard level scythes cross each other and then move it downward with his unnatural speed and abnormal strength that can releasing a strong sudden cross compressed air blast that can cut and slice through flesh and make a great damage to it.Cross blast is the sudden strong compressed air blow.He can use it three times and for the cool down he will wait 2 post. .
▌ BERRIES: Level 1 (Starting Technique)

[MOUSE]

your skills are too strong for starter skills which, if they are based off your major, may be lvl 3 skills. If they are based off your minor they can be lvl 2 skills. Please adjust the effects to better fit low level skills.

[Phoenix Blaza]

Fixed it

[COLONEL]

Buddy, I can see that you weakened your techs down but they still some decreasing that can be done due to the sol fact, these are lvl one. Perhaps if you have the funds, purchases them at lvl two or three like Mouse previously stated.

[MOUSE]

They can be lvl 2 or 3 for no extra charge if the skill is related to you're majors or minors since they are you're starter skills but.. they don't match your characters majors or minors

[Phoenix Blaza]

fixed it

[MIKEY]

"releasing a strong sudden cross compressed air blast that can cut and slice through every things but not the seastones" - No, too strong. Weaken that.

[Phoenix Blaza]

fixed IT

[MIKEY]

I said weaken it, I never said be completely unspecific as to what it can damage. Can it slice through wood, stone, metal, flesh, bone etc? You need to give specifics for that kind of attack Shawn.

[Phoenix Blaza]

I fixed Nikon

[COLONEL]

Buddy, your missing your majors and minors.

[Phoenix Blaza]

I want to make it lvl one tech not lvl three, how can i make it lvl one tech?

[Event Chef]

You have not filled in either the major or minor on either of your techs. Whilst not necessary to fill in both you do have to fill in one of them (as far as I am aware).


Also, as your scythe technique relates to speed and power if you put it as level 3 and put the majors to power and haste(which are your majors I believe) then you get it to level 3 for FREE. No point having it level one when you can get level 3 for nothing. In fact your super leg is a power technique so you could have at level 3 for nothing as well.


No matter what happens you have to specify how much damage it can do. There is no way on earth you are getting a level one technique that can slice metal, stones and bones.

As your Cross Blast it is an air blade attack your best bet would be relating it to a sword grade in power. For a level one i'd suggest generic grade, if you use your majors and get it to level 3 for free i'd suggest poor grade with a sharpness enhancement.

If you wanted it to have more power then that you'd have to increase the cooldown time.

The same goes for Super Leg. I'm ok with it fracturing bones at level one or if you get it to level 3 via majors then breaking is fine. If you want it at level one with breaking power you need a bigger cooldown.


I realise i'm not a tech mod, but i've seen this same thread come up so many times recently I thought i'd try to clarify everything at once.

[Phoenix Blaza]

Fixed it.
Thank you Catherine

[Event Chef]

*read for a moment* That seems a lot better. And now i am a member of customs staff again so

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