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Post by Mr. Bobbin on Mar 7, 2011 10:07:39 GMT -6
Bounty Hunter
[/font] ( Lin Shiyao )[/font] [/center] [/b] 20 ✘ SEX: Male ✘ RACE: Human ✘ STATUS: Single, Hetero ✘ POSITON: N/A ✘ MAJOR: Accuracy, Haste ✘ MINOR: Endurance, Power [/ul] Black Hair and Brown Eyes
[/font] ( 6 Foot, 180 pounds )[/font] [/center] [/b] Lin is a relatively tall man with little fat and a fine layering of muscle, as of someone accustomed to daily physical labor. He has darker skin, as of a man who spends his days out in the sun. In addition, his jet black hair and almond-shaped brown eyes give him an air of exotic mystery. He has no refinement when it comes to his appearance; the occasional shave appears to be the only thing he attempts to do to tame his wild appearance. As a result, he looks rather like a wild animal at times, something he apparently likes to cultivate. ✘ CLOTHING: Lin's choice of clothing reflects his bizarre appearance. Flowing gis, bound by belts and sashes to prevent tripping, and designed for perfect ease of movement. He also favors bright colors, oranges and greens, with esoteric symbols and glyphs embroidered on them in strategic locations. He wears leather boots, lighter than traditional workboots, and generally wears nothing on his head except for a white ribbon to keep his long hair out of his eyes. ✘ SIGNATURE: The scar on his face and his unusual get-up. [/ul] "I want to fight the best."
[/font] ( Let me show you just what I'm made of... )[/font] [/center] [/b] Training Learning new Things Watching Strong Fighters Good Stories Thunderstorms Windy Days ✘ DISLIKES: Losing Waiting Cramped Spaces Big Cities Fighting "Weaklings" Ineffectual People ✘ POSTIVE TRAITS:Brave Self-sufficient Constantly self-challenging Loyal Handles Danger Well ✘ NEGATIVE TRAITS: Impatient Claustrophobic Doesn't handle loss well Tends to give up when things get real bad Easily Angered [/ul] The Wandering Brawler
[/font] ( Yamcha/Dragon Ball )[/size][/font] [/center] ✘ ITEMS: Grappling Hooks, Utility Knives and assorted items of ship repair and maintenance. ✘ WEAPONS: When he's not relying on his own fists, Lin has been known to use a wooden staff, round and unornamented. ✘ SKILLS:[/i] Lin is a student of hand-to-hand combat, and it is this that he devotes the bulk of his training and research. While he is currently wandering the seas, looking for other styles to learn, his current favorite is his own signature style, a blend of short range strikes and precise blows using the palm and fingertips to explosive effect. Currently, he seeks a style that will give him the power to trump even armed opponents. Acrobat: Years spent in the wild forests and hopping along rigging have granted Lin exceptional control over his own body. He can jump higher and further than the average person, climb and swing with more efficiency. In short, he makes perfect use of both Haste and Accuracy to dance unerringly around his opponents. Pirate Hunter: Lin knows the ins and outs of the pirate lifestyle, having hunted them for money for a long time. He knows the average layout of ships, the basic mechanics of rudder and sail, the general chain of command and the battle tactics of pirate crews, among other things, that serve him well in terms of disabling and capturing them.[/ul] [/size][/blockquote]
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Post by Mr. Bobbin on Mar 7, 2011 10:14:40 GMT -6
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Miles
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Post by Miles on Mar 7, 2011 17:00:55 GMT -6
welcome to BNB and thanks for applying. just a few things we need to go over and straighten out in your profile. 'u' thanks.
- For position, please just put N/A since your character is a bounty hunter.
- Strength isn't an archtype. While i'm quite sure you meant power, please do change to that so we won't have any issues or confusion.
- You mention that your character is relatively skinny by also composed of more muscle than fat. That seems to slightly contradict itself. I would also like to mention that at 6 foot and 195 pounds, your character is technically considered 'overweight', with a BMI probably around 25 or 26 (estimating here). Just.. re clarify on his body shape and proportions, because if he's this weight he's most likely muscular; but that wouldn't make him skinny either.
Overall, your application was really good - relatively balanced and I love Yamcha. :3 When you are done with the edits, please respond to this thread saying so. If you have questions or need help, you can post here, poke me in the cbox, or shoot me a PM.
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Miles
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Post by Miles on Mar 7, 2011 17:12:10 GMT -6
Accepted~ thanks for all the speedy edits. enjoy the rp.
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