BOUNTY HUNTER: TANAKA

[Tanaka]

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NAME & ALIAS ■ "Lady" Tanaka
AGE ■ 16
RACE ■ Human
GENDER ■ Male
SEXUALITY ■ Heterosexual
HEARTH ■ Momoiro Island, the Grand Line
PROFFESION ■ Bounty Hunter/Thief/Kunoichi

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PERSONALITY ■

♥ High-Spirited
♥ Not subtle
♥ Dedicated
♥ Tends to make a lot of "arch-rivals"
♥ Okama to the core! <3

LIKES

DISLIKES

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ABILITIES ■

Kunoichi Jutsu: Otherwise known as the "Art of the Shadowy Maiden," this is a blanket style of martial arts that Tanaka specializes in. Full of feats of acrobatics and dynamic attacks, this style perfectly showcases Tanaka's haste and accuracy. Also falling under this style is a penchant for being sneaky. Tanaka is a dab hand at remaining undetected, and while he is nowhere near the perfect shadow maiden he longs to be, he still possesses enough skill to keep the average ruffian in the dark.

Okama Kenpo: Born and raised on Momoiro Island, Tanaka has the heart of a maiden and the strength to match. One part ballet, one part karate, Okama Kenpo is a surprising combination of haste and power, all wrapped up in a seemingly disarming package. When the user focuses their power properly, they can strike the opponents with beastly power, especially in the legs, which appear to be heavily favored for this style.

MAJOR & MINOR ■

WEAPONS/ITEMS ■ Caltrops (up to 15)
Shuriken (Up to 10)
Smoke Bombs (3)

Ninjato: A short sword with a curved blade and a black, ornamented hilt, used for close quarter's combat and covert assassination. As far as swords go, it's pretty cheap.

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nickname; Faust
contact: pm
face claim: Disgaea: Kunoichi

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[Tanaka]

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ABILITY NAME: Tan Tanuki no Mi
ABILITY TYPE: Zoan Devil Fruit
ABILITY LEVEL: Level 1
ABILITY DESCRIPTION: This fruit takes the form of an unusually large brown apple with black lines of varying widths along its rind. When ingested, this fruit confers the power of the mythical tanuki demon.

Like all Zoan fruits, this power naturally comes with three forms, human, animal and hybrid. In hybrid form, the user has naturally enhanced senses (smell and hearing, primarily, these being on par with a wild animal's) and a measure of enhanced agility and strength.

The Tanuki fruit also has the secondary ability of allowing the use of "Tanuki Magic." The user can produce green leaves from their hands which, when affixed to an object or person, can give them the appearance (not the attributes) of whatever the user wills, within the limits of the user's ability (naturally, large and/or intricate illusions or ones requiring multiple leaves need enhanced talent and control). If the leaf (which is always visible on whatever illusory object is created) is removed, the magic is instantly dispelled. The leaves can also be used as impromptu projectiles, inflicting cutting damage.

Compared to other Zoan fruits of its kind, particularly Mtyhical ones, this fruit seems to impart very little in the way of combat-relevant boosts. Enhancements to strength and agility are negligible compared to regular human ability, leading many to consider this fruit to be a booby prize. The user is also vulnerable to water like any other devil fruit user.

Techniques:

ABILITY NAME: Tan Tanuki Trans-ta-formatation!
ABILITY TYPE: Devil Fruit
ABILITY LEVEL: Level I
ABILITY DESCRIPTION: Using the legendary powers of the tanuki demon, the Devil Fruit user can materialize a special magic leaf that adheres to any person or object they wish and, by activating the spell, can cause the object to "transform," taking on the appearance of whatever the user wills. At level one, the illusion is incapable of being too intricate, and must remain at about the same size as the original object (Making a human appear to be a statue is okay; making a human appear to be a marble is not). This technique has a few drawbacks. Firstly, it can only create the appearance that the object has changed, and does not change the properties of the object at all (in some cases, parts of the original object might become invisible or gain intangible elements. Secondly, the leaf that was part of the illusion always remains somewhere on the body, clearly visible to those who are looking for it. These illusions can last for two posts and have a two post cooldown between uses. Currently, only one illusion spell can be maintained at a time.

ABILITY NAME: Tan Tanuki Summer Tasquall
ABILITY TYPE: Devil Fruit
ABILITY LEVEL: Level I
ABILITY DESCRIPTION: The user of the Tan Tanuki fruit will create and manipulate a whole mess of fresh green leaves from the palms of their hands and with their special tanuki powers will create a whirlwind of leaves! The user can control this whirlwind within a range of up to 4 meters for up to two posts. Any foe who finds themselves caught within the vortex of leaves will be sliced by their sharp edges. Lasts for two posts, has a three post cool down. Leaves cause a multitude of minor cuts and slashes to the bodies of those trapped inside the vortex.

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[MOUSE]

can you list the abilities of your df as separate abilities from the main description of the fruit, just so when we want to know what the abilities are and what they do they are listed there.

[Tanaka]

Done

[Crummonster]

Your abilities seem more like explanations on fighting styles really, just need you to do some clarifying.

For the first one, explain pseudo-magic a little better, since magic isn't really apart of one piece. If your doing things like random bursts of speed, blades of air, or whatever, your gonna need to explain what all it can do and remember that it is only one ability slot. You can buy more slots later on, or upgrade this one, w/e.

The second one is really just an explanation of how your character fights, as said. Please tell us the duration of the ability if there is one, and a cooldown, or what is does passively, unless your aiming on the passive aspect of it to be able to do things normal humans can't with his haste major, such as flips, jumps, etc.

[Tanaka]

Changed the wording around some. For the record, a passive "this character can do things others can't" thing is exactly what I was going for. I figure I can use those as a spring board for more specific techniques when I get the Berri.

[Crummonster]

Alright, looks good! Thanks for bearing with me!

1 l 2 Approved

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[MOUSE]

So I see you added spaces between the lines on your df description which is nice and helps read it but not quite what I was asking for. I do see now that your fruit only has one 'active' ability so far so the "Tanooki Magic" would probably take up one of your starter slots leaving you with a free starter slot to make up what other skill you'd like for the fruit and then the passive's on your fruit are fine and don't need a skill slot for them. So... if you could fill out this little form thingeh for tanooki magic and add that under your DF discriptor thingeh you have my 1/2~

ABILITY NAME: Tanooki Magic
ABILITY TYPE: Devil Fruit
ABILITY LEVEL: Level I
ABILITY DESCRIPTION: Description of how it works even though you already did, monotonous I know but please bear with us, it's for easy copy/pasting for when you use it in a thread. T1 courtesy and all that. Don't forget to list any weaknesses it has as well plox <3


and here's my brain child for a second ability, you do not by any means have to use it, just an example of what I mean for df 'active' abilities.


ABILITY NAME: Tanooki Whirlwind!
ABILITY TYPE: Devil Fruit
ABILITY LEVEL: Level I
ABILITY DESCRIPTION: The user of the Tan Tanooki fruit will create and manipulate a whole mess of fresh green leaves from the palms of their hands and with their special tanooki powers will create a whirlwind of leaves! The user can control this whirlwind within a range of up to 4 meters for up to two posts. Any foe who finds themselves caught within the vortex of leaves will be sliced by their sharp edges. lasts for two posts, has a three post cool down. Leaves cause a multitude of minor cuts and slashes to the bodies of those trapped inside the vortex.


PS: If you can't tell I really like your df, otherwise I wouldn't even really care about what kind of skills it could possibly have. I just find it really creative and fun. Also you said your character is a male and call him a 'he' a lot in various descriptions but isn't your face claim a female character? I'm so confused @_____@'

[Tanaka]

Good ideas actually. If you don't mind, I actually took the whirlwind idea and ran with it. Really, I just changed the name to give it a sillier OP vibe.

Also, you're reading that right. Tanaka is, among other things, one of the only full-fledged okama to grace the seas of BnB. He's a cross-dressing kunoichi-slash-badger-man.

[MOUSE]

2/2 wheeeee