POISONOUS TOUCH

[Franciscus Draco]

▌ NAME: Doku Doku no Mi [Level I]
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▌ DESCRIPTION: The consumer of the doku doku fruit has developed the prowess to create and manipulate poisons in the form of a liquid or airborne gas. The extent of their ability is basic, allowing them to manipulate poison within a radius of thirty meters, and create a five meter cube of liquid poison per second. Because the gas form of poison is thinner and occupies a large space, the volume is that of a fifteen meter cube per second. Depending on the users knowledge of poisons, they are able to create them in liquid or gaseous forms. As well as the ability to manipulate and create poison, the user gains immunity to every type of poison, each time they encounter a new poison, it can be added to their registry of poisons, albeit they can often create their own. Poison can manifest through breath, flesh, or openings within the bodies (including pores).
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▌ NAME: Necrotoxin Tendrils[Level I]
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▌ DESCRIPTION: Necrotoxin is a type of poisonous compound that is capable of causing death to cells within the body. It is with this poisonous element, that the user is able to create eight tendrils from any point on their body, each ten meters in length. In liquid form, the toxin can have a corrosive affect to flesh and metals (steel), but the users tendrils only last three posts. With the ability to move at one hundred meters per second (slower than a bullet), the user can manipulate the tendrils in anyway within a ten meter radius. Each tendril is three inches in diameter, and has a jelly like consistency, still, they are solid enough to coil around and throw objects no larger than the user's hand. The use of necrotoxin tendrils has a cooldown of two posts before it can be used again.
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▌ NAME: Nuerotoxin Cloud
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▌ DESCRIPTION: Nuerotoxin is a type of poisonous compound that directly affects the nervous system. It is with this poisonous element that the user unleashes a poisonous cloud from their lips. Spewing a ten meter wide cone of poisonous gas at sixty meters per second, the poison travels ten meters forward, lingering in the air two posts before vanishing. Through inhalation, or contact with skin, the poison induces a state of paralysis upon a person. Inhalation can result in a full body paralysis, while the contact only affects portions of the body touched (ie. poison touches leg, leg is paralyzed). This paralysis is affective for one post; the duration of the affect decreases by 25% each time it is reused on a person. This stacking effect only applies in the thread in which it occurred. After the cloud disperses, there is a cool down of two posts.
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[MOUSE]

Your general description is good up to where you start talking about how fast it moves, that part would just depend on the actual skills so you don't need to include it in your description. As for your skills They need to be a single facet ability. EX: you create a cloud of Nuerotoxin, state how long it lasts, what effects it brings upon other characters, how fast it travels blah blah blah.

Basically they need to be more specified otherwise you could walk into a thread and use each skill in every post. When they're specified then you can have a cool down on how often you can use them, unspecified it's to hard to tell when one ability starts and ends.

[Franciscus Draco]

editted.

[MOUSE]

second skill needs a cool down that begins when the cloud disappears

[Franciscus Draco]

dunnnn

[MOUSE]

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[AFRO SAMURAI]

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