DF stuff

[Haruki Mithril]

lv1 mastery and two free lv1 tech slots.

▌ NAME: Devil fruit Control lv1
▌ DESCRIPTION: With this level of control, the user is capable of making himself invisible, but not totally. While invisible it is possible to see the outline of him, and the light bending around him. He is also able to cover objects in the imperfect invisibility. The limit of objects is in a sphere around him. The sphere would me max 5 meters.


▌ NAME: Remote sphere
▌ MAJORS: Heart
▌ MINORS: Accuracy
▌ DESCRIPTION: Using the power of the Devil fruit, The user can create a sphere somewhere else than himself. The sphere can only be 5 meters in diameter, and the center can only be made 10 meters away from him. Anything inside the sphere can get the Imperfect invisibility, but he can choose what that turns invisible. The sphere cannot be moved once made, and stays in place for two posts. After that, it need a 4 post cooldown.
▌ BERI: 1st free DF tech slot

[Event Chef]

So the sphere can be 10 meteres away from him and its 5 metres in diameter?
Also, i'd say that you can turn anything imperfectly invisible in the sphere (including all of it) but you get to pick what. I think this just needs tidying up grammar wise really.

The second one...i'm not even sure if you need a tech for really. I mean you're just using the fruit and attacking rapidly. But if you want to use that then do so.

[ADMINSAUR AARON]

▌ NAME: Suke Suke No Mi [stage one]
▌ MAJORS: -----
▌ MINORS: -----
▌ DESCRIPTION: At the first level of control over the Suke Suke No Mi, the user is capable of making himself invisible, however the transition is not yet perfect. While he does turn himself invisible, at this stage a small outline encompasses him, as the light bends around him. Though he may turn anything he touches near him into this state of imperfect invincibility. The object must be smaller then five meters in size, as his sphere of influence only extends that far.
▌ BERRIES: free mastery.


[blockquote][size=1][blockquote][blockquote][size=1][justify][b]▌ NAME:[/b] Suke Suke No Mi [stage one]
[b]▌ MAJORS:[/b] -----
[b]▌ MINORS:[/b] -----
[b]▌ DESCRIPTION:[/b]  At the first level of control over the Suke Suke No Mi, the user is capable of making himself invisible, however the transition is not yet perfect. While he does turn himself invisible, at this stage a small outline encompasses him, as the light bends around him. Though he may turn anything he touches near him into this state of imperfect invincibility. The object must be  smaller then five meters in size, as his sphere of influence only extends that far.
[b]▌ BERRIES:[/b] free mastery.
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▌ NAME: Remote Sphere [stage one]
▌ MAJORS: -----
▌ MINORS: -----
▌ DESCRIPTION: Using the ability of the Suke Suke No Mi, to turn himself invisible he is able to create a sphere of influence around himself. This sphere is 5 meters in diameter in length, within this sphere he is able to control his invisibility. commonly done around himself, he is able to aid his friends or hide other objects out of sight be creating the sphere in the nearby vicinity, able to create this 'room' of influence within ten meters of his position. At this stage the technique remains effective for two posts, with a four post cool-down before it can be used again.


[blockquote][size=1][blockquote][blockquote][size=1][justify][b]▌ NAME:[/b] Remote Sphere [stage one]
[b]▌ MAJORS:[/b] -----
[b]▌ MINORS:[/b] -----
[b]▌ DESCRIPTION:[/b]  Using the ability of the Suke Suke No Mi, to turn himself invisible he is able to create a sphere of influence around himself. This sphere is 5 meters in diameter in length, within this sphere he is able to control his invisibility. commonly done around himself, he is able to aid his friends or hide other objects out of sight be creating the sphere in the nearby vicinity, able to create this 'room' of influence within ten meters of his position. At this stage the technique remains effective for two posts, with a four post cool-down before it can be used again.
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[ADMINSAUR AARON]

I put them in the proper template + rewrote them for you to look sexy and more appealing. either way the mastery appears good for stage one, and so does your first technique, a very useful support move. approved 1|2.

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[Catherine 'Kitty' West]

Approved 2/2