CIVILIAN, EVANGELINE DE IRIS

[EVANGELINE DE IRIS]

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NAME & ALIAS ■ Evangeline De Iris, White Lotus.
AGE ■ 19.
RACE ■ Human.
GENDER ■ Female.
SEXUALITY ■ Heterosexual.
HEARTH ■ Ohara, West Blue.
PROFFESION ■ Bodyguard to Hei-Bai.

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PERSONALITY ■

LIKES

DISLIKES

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ABILITIES ■

[/b] (Essential Life Force);
Gōnglǜ (Power); this ability goes hand in hand with her majors, intelligence or knowledge and her power. Evan is able to concentrate her life force, or chi, in general areas of her body. She is able to do this because of major training on her part. She is able to coordinated her breathing, movement, and her awareness so that everything is in sync. Because of this she can summon more life energy into specific portions of her body while not distracting or taking from other areas so that there is still a balance. Her first ability that comes into play is the ability to summon enormous amounts of energy into her arms so that she has more power than she normally would. She is able to lift heavier objects 5-6 times her weight and is able to deliver more devasting blows with her heavy swords. However, her movements and coordination are organized, as well it would shocking if the aftershock of her attacks didn't slightly wind opponents whether Eva is in a calm state or out of control, she's always at balance with her strengths.

The ability can be used 5 times per thread.

§Gǎnkuài (Haste); With the harmony of her breathing, movement and awareness. However, this takes into account most if not all of her major and minors, especially haste. However, this ability combines both the strength of power and haste. Her body becomes more limber as she coordinates the flow of her life force through her body, usually her legs so that she is quicker at moving, however she can't use her enhanced power at the same time and must have energy summoned to her legs more. With moving more of the flow to her legs as well as most of her body she becomes more flexible and able to dodge more effectively. Also, if she summons more to her legs she can utilize the same shockwave from earlier but to give her a boost or throw the opponent away from her as she moves away.

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WEAPONS/ITEMS ■

[/url][/b] - A set of Chinese swords that are wider and thicker than common swords and are more suitable for heavy cutting. They are 28 inches in length. They have a yin and yang type design on them, most of the blade on one is silver while most of the blade on the other is black. They have more of a sharper point than the normal Kan Dao sword however and is much like a broadsword. Kan doa is actually an abbreviation for Dadao(big sword) and Kandao(chop sword) in Chinese.

⊗ 2 Hidden Daggers - One is a double edged dagger that has a 5 1/4 inch blade that is 11 inches overall. The other dagger has teeth that have the function of catching a foes sword in its teeth and with a twist disabling or breaking it. The blade of this swordbreaker dagger is 2" wide and 9-5/8" long, with an overall length of 16" and has a leather sheath.
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nickname; kats
contact: skype.
face claim: Kaine from Nier

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[EVANGELINE DE IRIS]

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ABILITY NAME: name of your devil fruit, haki, or super-human.
ABILITY TYPE: devil fruit, haki, super-human ability.
ABILITY LEVEL: strength of ability, based on type.
ABILITY DESCRIPTION: general description of your ability.

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[MIKEY]

I have no real issue with the abilities you've suggested here, but I would however like to see you give some kind of limit as to how often you can use them within each thread. The ability to continuously generate 5-6 times more power in striking eternally isn't ever going to be accepted, so I'd like to see a limit on that please. Same goes with your ability to dodge strikes. I'm not going to ask you to give drawbacks purely because you've made it clear you can't use these two abilities together, but I do not want to see them abused or else I will pull your profile and make you make more severe edits.

So yeah, add limits to usage and you're golden in my mind.

[EVANGELINE DE IRIS]

Edited.

[MIKEY]

I think you misunderstood me, and I apologise for any lack of clarity on my part. But when I said limitations, I meant a maximum amount of times the techniques can be completed within the thread in its entirety, not simply how many times before she needs a break. Also, considering the relative power and skill on show there, 5 times with a two post cool down is far too much. You'll need to lower the number of times to something like 3.

So do that, and add in a total number of times you can perform these and we're done. If you're having trouble trying to work out how many is too many, I recommend you read some of the other accepted profiles.

[MIKEY]

Accepted.
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[COLONEL]

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